![[panel one] kat is sitting cradling her coffee when dieke enters dieke: remember teal? the colour? dieke: what happened with that [panel two] kat has put her coffee down and dieke is now sitting kat: i dunno kat: it probably went to an old colour's home [panel three] kat is now holding her coffee in her other hand and dieke is slightly smiling kat: and the younger colours push it around in a wheelchair](https://piefed.cdn.blahaj.zone/posts/Pw/Gu/PwGuFT9TPFSrsob.png "[panel one] kat is sitting cradling her coffee when dieke enters dieke: remember teal? the colour? dieke: what happened with that [panel two] kat has put her coffee down and dieke is now sitting kat: i dunno kat: it probably went to an old colour's home [panel three] kat is now holding her coffee in her other hand and dieke is slightly smiling kat: and the younger colours push it around in a wheelchair")
by me. there might be a website if i feel like making more and i might
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Good start but teal was in just a few years ago I actually donated a pair of teal espadrilles today that I got during the trend cause I love teal lol
- 4 days
is the handwriting the problem or the resolution?
- 2 days
For me it’s the writing. It’s legible, but I struggled to read quite a few words. Edit: I appreciate the better way of spelling colour haha.
- 2 days
i will use a thicker nib, blacker ink and larger letters in future installments to reduce the blur
- 2 days
Nice. I hope my comment didn’t come off as rude. I liked the comic quite a bit! Looking forward to more.
4 daysMaybe a combination of text size relative to the panel, and the pen. The horizontal strokes are nice and bold, but the vertical strokes are hard to see without zooming in.
- 3 days
I think it’s legible, just need to be bigger so you don’t have to zoom in
The resolution, yes. The handwriting can be a nice addition to the style but the image quality needs to be better. Sorry if I came out mean, it wasn’t my intention.
- 3 days
thanks to all for the feedback, i will make sure to test future installments on phone screens
- Macallan@lemmy.worldEnglish3 days
For me, it feels like the text isn’t dark enough. I had to zoom in to read it.
Did you change the resolution after @moshtrodomus666’s comment? Because at þe time I’m writing, it looks fine - it’s about 800x1900 and png, and I see no artifacts. Could be @mostrodomus666’s client is mangling þe image.
